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If I Could Be

sami
United States
Gitarre:
sami 111 jams
Remix step I
flavien13
United States
Gesang:
flavien13 31 jams

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Daumen:
+ 18
Hochgeladen:
04.12.2020
Hörer:
1.073
Downloads:
5
Remixe:
2
I have been promising sami this work for his beautiful melody for quite a while. I'm sure he gave up on me by now. there's been a lot of good adds, but once i got a hook on the lyrics, the simplicity of using this version stays truest, to me, of a 1960's style song of this type. maybe a guy sitting on his blanket and strumming his guitar and singing at a love-in. my hope is to have captured ...
DanDiplo
I like the stark simplicity of an unadorned guitar and a voice. It's very pure, authentic and speaks directly to the listener without any unnecessary burnishing. Has a Johnny Cash vibe but perhaps with some Dylan/Cohen in the lyrics (which are very on point!). Great work! +6
flavien13
flavien13 thanks, man. :) +0
hartmut
hartmut young James Taylor comes into my mind +2
sami
Man that was great!! I loved it!! :) Thank you for doing that and am glad you enjoyed it. You sound great!! +3
sami
sami I really love the lyrics too!! With your permission, I might sing a version with them too if you don't mind? +2
flavien13
flavien13 by all means, please... +1
flavien13
flavien13 i had the first four lines written the day you uploaded this track, but i had no idea where it was going. last couple of days it came to me and whump there it is! :D +1
Neronick
Neronick That's the way a composer works! You only need to know the secret "how to write the 2nd verse".
You got it.
:)
+0
Shi
this sounds real nice flavien :) liking the lyrics and vocals and sweet guitar from sami as well :) +3
flavien13
flavien13 thanks shi, glad you liked it. <3 +1
slin
a fantastic vocal and text flavien.;) +2
flavien13
flavien13 thank you so much nils. always glad to hear from you. <3 +1
PJE
You tell a great poignant story with your lyrics and stylish authentic individuality great flavien:W:) +2
flavien13
flavien13 thanks peter. that's a very nice compliment. <3 +0
Uloisius
very nice song ;o) +2
flavien13
flavien13 thanks uloisius. you were actually bouncing around in my thoughts when i was writing it. <3 +1
Uloisius
Uloisius Yes, I'm someone who, if he could, would like to change the world, so we're already two ;o)
I think if everyone is there with what is available to him and does what he can then a lot would be achieved, if we all did that then we would have changed the world.
We all live in the world we created, in the world we deserve as humanity. The change begins in the heart and in the head of each individual, if we make ourselves aware of this then we may be able to leave those who will come after us a world they deserve, but if we do nothing then we leave a broken planet. We can all do something, we have to change, then the dire conditions that currently prevail in the world will also change ;o)
+1
btrasher
great add flavien!!:):W +2
flavien13
flavien13 thanks stephane <3 +1
kmoon235
What a FANTASTIC job you did with that vocal (and lyric too-love 'em). BRAVO BUDDY<3<3<3
keith
+2
flavien13
flavien13 thanks keith. <3 +1
Demian
Good one!! +2
flavien13
flavien13 thanks demian. you're drums are a geat add. :) +1
JeanPaul66
:D:Wnice work flavien and excellent text ...<3:W +2
flavien13
flavien13 thank you paolo. i like this piece very much. :) +1