Falling

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Weazle
Germany
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Weazle 87 jams
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tomthecat
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tomthecat 6 jams
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I've been making simple drafts and practicing songwriting with these (and other) awesome drum tracks. This one tells a story of a guy jumping off a cliff into an ocean and his last thoughts before the big splash. There's a lot of rerecording that needs to get done, but I'm a fan of the basic premise and structure. Wasn't sure what to do with the end- wishing the drums would have come in a little sooner as it's a ...
Major 3rd
I love your melodic ideas....very cool...you play well and think great...getting the recording part down to where tracks are not too hot and distorting takes a little toying around with...the guitars sound like their in the red. too hot....something is??.but hard to tell not being able to see....but that being said the music arrangement, playing, and vocals are great...check all your levels and master levels on your DAW so that they are not going in the red on the meter..then if that's okay check your interface levels that they are not going in the red ..sounds like something is...don't throw this out...It's great...just check those things first and I bet you'll notice a huge difference. That buzzing distortion shoudn't be there.. +3
DanDiplo
Yeah, I agree with Major - this could be really great, but just needs the guitar sound fixing, as it's not a "nice" distortion. But the singing and composition is really good and I'd love to hear it cleaned-up. +1
Ernie440
Cool original tune ... nice work! +0
abuitremorem
Sounds great - welcome and I hope you have fun in Wikiloops:W:) +0
Baerenkind
Ich cool agreed with Ernie zu gut you have great ideas. +0
Baerenkind
I do agreed with Ernie but you have great ideas. +0
Shi
welcome to the Loops from me tomthecat. Nice to hear you sing and play your guitar.. Cool song from you.:) +0
Inkless
This is excellent, , welcome to the Loops !B):) +0